Please try the following stylesheet:
<xsl:stylesheet version="1.0" xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform"
xmlns:fo="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Format">
<xsl:output method="xml" indent="yes" omit-xml-declaration="yes"></xsl:output>
<xsl:template match="/">
<CardLoadRequest>
<cardLoads>
<xsl:for-each select="CardLoadRequest/CrewCardLoad">
<cardLoad>
<FinanicalData>
<empid><xsl:value-of select="@employeePayrollNumber"/></empid>
<!-- where did you get this data? -->
<cardID>XXXXX</cardID>
<PaymentIdentifier><xsl:value-of select="@crewPaymentIdentifier"/></PaymentIdentifier>
<amount><xsl:value-of select="@amount"/></amount>
</FinanicalData>
<xsl:for-each select="../@*[not(name()='version')]">
<NonFinanicalData>
<id><xsl:value-of select="name()"/></id>
<Value><xsl:value-of select="."/></Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
</xsl:for-each>
</cardLoad>
</xsl:for-each>
</cardLoads>
</CardLoadRequest>
</xsl:template>
</xsl:stylesheet>
this outputs:
<CardLoadRequest xmlns:fo="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Format">
<cardLoads>
<cardLoad>
<FinanicalData>
<empid>407XXX</empid>
<cardID>XXXXX</cardID>
<PaymentIdentifier>XXXXXXX</PaymentIdentifier>
<amount>0.01</amount>
</FinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>fileType</id>
<Value>XXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>designator</id>
<Value>VS</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightNumber</id>
<Value>XX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>suffix</id>
<Value>-</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightPaymentIdentifier</id>
<Value>2XXXXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>creationDateTime</id>
<Value>2014-01-27T10:41:12+00:00</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legNumber</id>
<Value>1</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legOrigin</id>
<Value>LXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legDestination</id>
<Value>BXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightDate</id>
<Value>2014-02-27+00:00</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>isoCurrencyCode</id>
<Value>USD</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
</cardLoad>
<cardLoad>
<FinanicalData>
<empid>408XXX</empid>
<cardID>XXXXX</cardID>
<PaymentIdentifier>XXXXXXX</PaymentIdentifier>
<amount>0.01</amount>
</FinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>fileType</id>
<Value>XXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>designator</id>
<Value>VS</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightNumber</id>
<Value>XX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>suffix</id>
<Value>-</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightPaymentIdentifier</id>
<Value>2XXXXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>creationDateTime</id>
<Value>2014-01-27T10:41:12+00:00</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legNumber</id>
<Value>1</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legOrigin</id>
<Value>LXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legDestination</id>
<Value>BXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightDate</id>
<Value>2014-02-27+00:00</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>isoCurrencyCode</id>
<Value>USD</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
</cardLoad>
<cardLoad>
<FinanicalData>
<empid>409XXX</empid>
<cardID>XXXXX</cardID>
<PaymentIdentifier>XXXXXXX</PaymentIdentifier>
<amount>0.01</amount>
</FinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>fileType</id>
<Value>XXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>designator</id>
<Value>VS</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightNumber</id>
<Value>XX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>suffix</id>
<Value>-</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightPaymentIdentifier</id>
<Value>2XXXXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>creationDateTime</id>
<Value>2014-01-27T10:41:12+00:00</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legNumber</id>
<Value>1</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legOrigin</id>
<Value>LXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>legDestination</id>
<Value>BXX</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>flightDate</id>
<Value>2014-02-27+00:00</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
<NonFinanicalData>
<id>isoCurrencyCode</id>
<Value>USD</Value>
</NonFinanicalData>
</cardLoad>
</cardLoads>
</CardLoadRequest>
Please delete xmlns:fo="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Format"
in the stylesheet if you are not going to use it.
P.S. you owe me a cup of coffee. :D