There are two main problems with your grammar:
You currently can generate some strings not in the language. As an example, your grammar can generate acacbcbc, which isn't in the language.
Your grammar is not LL(1) because you have numerous FIRST/FIRST conflicts. For example, the pair of productions A → acA and A → ac both start with a, so given the nonterminal A and the character a, you can't determine which production to apply.
As a hint, the strings in your language are precisely the strings of the form ambncncm. In other words, try seeing if you can generate m a's at the front and m c's at the back, then switch and generate n b's matched with n c's. You might want to try finding a grammar for amcm first and see if you can adapt it.
EDIT for the new grammar: This looks a lot better! However, you still have a FIRST/FIRST conflict in the productions
B → bBc
and
B → bc
Additionally, your grammar cannot generate the strings ac
or ε. You should be able to resolve both of these issues by fixing up the FIRST/FIRST conflict. As a hint: how could you replace the second production with one that lets you generate no characters?
Hope this helps!