Your external files should only have JavaScript in them, so nothing that looks like
<this/>
should be in them. It looks like you just want:
$(document).ready(function() {
$('body').hide().fadeIn(3000);
});
...in your fadein1.js. Likewise for the other JS files.
When you have the document open in your browser, press F12 for some useful messages to paste here if it still isn't working.